FLASH FICTION FRIDAY ~Blind-Date~

Posted: January 28, 2015 in Uncategorized
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FFF Prompt on-on-off

Thank you to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for all her work and organization. You can visit her site and read through the other Flash Fiction postings at:

https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2015/01/28/23-january-2015/

For those who are new, Rochelle shares a photo prompt to which several #FridayFictioneers compose a 100-word flash of fiction. Come, feel the jolt.

Here’s my contribution:

Blind-Date

“It’s painted black.”

“Yes, my play room.” Justine pressed all hundred-nine pounds against him and bit into his flesh. “You came here with a purpose, so let’s play.”

Benson exhaled both pain and pleasure; he grasped deeply into her dark curls then yanked. “That’s right, bitch.” He kissed her hard. She responded with tongue flicks before biting his lip. She shoved him back into a bolted down wooden chair.

He smiled, murderously.

Using Velcro straps she secured his wrists and ankles, then secured a blindfold. The final piece plugged directly into a rigged outlet and snugged over his head.

jKb

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Comments
  1. Now there’s a new fetish, playing executioner. (On a side note, when I first read this, I read “hundred-nine pounds” as “nine hundred pounds.” It was quite a different image. 🙂 )
    -David

  2. Sandra says:

    Electrifying piece. Your evil characters are always so… devilish.

  3. Nan Falkner says:

    Wow, creepy gal and guy – but he must deserve it – right? Good story! Nan

  4. A bit unsettling, this. In a good but creepy way. Well done.

  5. uuuooohhhh horror. Love it!

  6. helenmidgley says:

    That’s some foreplay 😉

  7. Sheila says:

    Wow, that’s some playroom. Great job, vivid descriptions.

  8. dmmacilroy says:

    Dear JK,

    Gives a whole new meaning to the phrase, “You turn me on”. Or perhaps, “AC/DC”. Or… oh, never mind.

    Good to see you this week.

    Aloha,

    Doug

  9. wildbilbo says:

    Eep! I hope he knows the safe word!

    Entertaining, risqué story.
    🙂

  10. Sarah Ann says:

    I think this pair deserve each other. Well told – your descriptions took me there, unfortunately. 🙂

  11. Somehow I feel that this might come to a shocking end

  12. Ooh. That’ll spark up a relationship.
    Randy

  13. So Justine is her name – I shall avoid her like the plague.

  14. Dee says:

    Excellent, you do ‘evil’ so well JK

  15. Creatopath says:

    I’m enjoying your thriller stories. Must read some more! Very creative.

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