FLASH FICTION FRIDAY ~What I Can Offer~

Posted: September 10, 2014 in Uncategorized
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Thank you to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for all her work and organization. You can visit her site and read through the other Flash Fiction postings at:

http://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2014/09/10/12-september-2014/

For those who are new, Rochelle shares a photo prompt to which several #FridayFictioneers compose a 100-word flash of fiction. Come, sink your teeth into this.

Here’s my contribution:

What I Can Offer

“Nothing is forever, dear. Not even love.” The elder mistress comforted and soothed as she turned him toward the mirror. She kissed his neck and caressed his sex. “She’s left, but oh what I can offer.” He gazed upon the image and witnessed her back and shoulders were straighter, her hair somehow fuller, her eyes regained a glow long since dissipated. She pulled against him, urgently pressing the fullness of her breasts against his back. And as her image flickered and faded she sank deep and tasted her youthful ecstasy, hot and salty and filling her mouth, feeding her lust.

jKb

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Comments
  1. Ah.. she sucked up his life.. but she can’t have been a vampire if she was visible in the mirror…

  2. dmmacilroy says:

    Dear J.K.,

    Dorianne Gray the mistress from hell. Well done.

    Aloha,

    Doug

  3. Very powerful stuff, horror hidden by a veil of erotica, until it’s too late. One of my favorites from you.

  4. Dorianne Gray indeed! I wouldn’t like to see what’s in her attic. Good story! I only have one quibble, and it’s a personal one. I’ve never liked the use of the word ‘sex’ as an alternative to actual names of body parts. Why not tell it like it is – we know what’s happening!
    Claire

    • JKBradley says:

      Thank you for stopping by and reading. Btw, I agree with you. On this bit I tried the five letter word, it didn’t fit as well as the four letter word, but I felt it would be too hard, so I elected the three letter one.

      Thanks again!

  5. For all the lovely words this is kind of creepy. Well done.

  6. Bradley, It sounds like she’s some kind of hellish monster, similar to a vampire but different in some ways. There seem to be all kinds of them out there. It was his misfortune to run into one. Well written.

  7. Nan Falkner says:

    Dear JK Bradley, She is sucking the life out of him – scary and wicked! Nan 🙂

  8. Excellent erotica and horror, combined into one 100 word gem! Well done. I’m with Claire on the “sex” bit, but I appreciate your response. 😉

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